Ok I didn't get the time to comment on this one before, but I will now
I really like this (that’s why I added it to my favourites ) but I do think it could improve.
I think that the walls that split the two rooms could be done a bit better. For example, it seems as if you have just drawn on two lines vertically, you haven't actually put thought into it, and then you have coloured it in and added texture then left it. Usually, you would create one line, then design an exact replica next to it when creating cut away walls like this, that way the dimensions don't look all stuffed up and it looks smooth and nice.
I like generally everything else, I think perhaps the black outlines could be deleted, that is always a good addition, but other than that it is looking good. I like the small details you add in here, the barrels, the shelving etc. It all fits in well, and reminds me of olden day Amiga games (the atmosphere) like Lure of the Temptress; that mouse animation is fantastic, reminds me of Prince of Persia on level eight (if you know what I mean).
Anyway good work, looks sort of like an olden style lair mixed with a modern day work zone.
Thanks for good help ... I'll read everything very careful and repair soon this room - but maybe after repair 1-st part "demolish site" ... after your post there
"Prince of Persia 1, 2 ..." yes but I don't remember this level
Thanks a lot
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I really like this (that’s why I added it to my favourites
I think that the walls that split the two rooms could be done a bit better. For example, it seems as if you have just drawn on two lines vertically, you haven't actually put thought into it, and then you have coloured it in and added texture then left it. Usually, you would create one line, then design an exact replica next to it when creating cut away walls like this, that way the dimensions don't look all stuffed up and it looks smooth and nice.
I like generally everything else, I think perhaps the black outlines could be deleted, that is always a good addition, but other than that it is looking good. I like the small details you add in here, the barrels, the shelving etc. It all fits in well, and reminds me of olden day Amiga games (the atmosphere) like Lure of the Temptress; that mouse animation is fantastic, reminds me of Prince of Persia on level eight (if you know what I mean).
Anyway good work, looks sort of like an olden style lair mixed with a modern day work zone.
Cheers
Callan
"Prince of Persia 1, 2 ..." yes but I don't remember this level
Thanks a lot
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